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last week and this week we have to write two commentaries and two responses on our classmates commentaries.. i made a record today where i'm the first one who submit the response.. the record is that i submit early in the morning a day before due date which is rare for me cause i will only have 'feelings' to do assignments when due date is near.. then when i was checking out some classmates response.. a girls response to my commentary... hahaha.. i never imagine people will actually read my commentary because i felt it's a bit crappy and boring... but i read positive comments on it.. besides a part where she disagree with my example because i just was rushing yesterday and simply put in one... other than that.. she likes my commentary... i know it's not something to be proud of but i'm so damn happy.. hahaahaha this is her conclusion

Nevertheless the author has done a decent job in writing this piece of commentary, acting as an eye opener for readers by showing her very own perspectives towards the pursuit of happiness. Author has helped me to realize the route to happiness is simplicity and it makes all the difference to change the mood of a person by showing small little appreciation to the one you love.

i never have a decent job in writing.. i love this girl... hahahaha thank you